1.) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ddTODbPyfqs
2.) Reflection of feedback from the first pitch
I never finished my first pitch so I didn't get any specific feedback, but I took into account the feedback I saw on other people's videos and did my best to apply them this time. The biggest things were having good lighting, keeping a confident and dynamic tone of voice (avoiding monotone speech), and using hand gestures.
3.) I decided to film outside so I could have good lighting and a more interesting setting. unfortunately the only camera I had was the one in my phone.
Kailey,
ReplyDeleteI do think that you did a great job of maintaining a dynamic tone of voice like you said and the lighting was very good. That was very proactive of you to look at other peoples comments to see what other people needed to work on so that you could better improve your own. The only thing I would say to change would be to have your camera on a stand so that the image is still for your viewers.