1.) https://youtu.be/cCHMgHXc0hE
2.) The feedback I got on the last video was that I should have the camera be stationary, since that would make the viewing experience easier and give me better angles. I wasn't surprised by this, as I was feeling that it was needed too. what makes this difficult is that the best camera I have access to right now is my phone, which is hard to have on a stand or prop up somewhere while still getting a good angle.
3.) I changed the script slightly to make it more concise, but the major thing that I changed from last time is that I stood still rather than walking while I spoke. I liked the idea of giving the speech while walking and having the camera move with me because it makes it feel like I'm chatting someone up while taking a stroll, which is a more casual and comfortable feel than simply talking at a stationary person or camera. Unfortunately I couldn't find a way to execute this idea effectively with my current equipment. The solution would probably be to have another person holding the camera, but alas, social distancing measures prevented me from trying that.
Kailey,
ReplyDeleteI thought you had a very interesting elevator pitch. I think that your idea can really go a long way if you were to follow through with it. In terms of improvements I would say that you could find a stand for your camera so that the camera isn’t bouncing around during the pitch. Other than that it was great!
HI Kailey,
ReplyDeleteHaving a stationary camera is beneficial for it can give different angles while making it easier for the viewer to keep their eyes on you. I like the idea of walking during the pitch, but when giving it to a company or a firm, you'll be in front of people and wont be able to walk too much. Besides that you had a great pitch and there was definitely improvement.